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Wednesday 13 March 2019

Looking again for forgotten gems I found a rough draft from Here Lies 60's scene.



Brigitte offered another scene. “The Lock.” He remembered the Canal and the Lock, the Barge and Lannigan.
They followed the street and left the rows of town cottages to a place of solitary farmhouses. From behind they heard the clip clop of a horse approaching. A low flat hay cart drew alongside. The driver beckoned and they joined three children who sat, legs dangling over the back of the cart between the road and the seesawing bogie. Through a gate they looked into a farmyard where a woman dressed in a long black dress washed clothes in a small bath, scrubbing the soaped clothes along the sideways leaning washboard.
Near the bridge, they climbed up the steep and narrow lawn, and jumped off, onto the grassy canal side below, and looked up waved thanks to the centre stone and looked beneath into the lock and the tall black water-keeper gates with sluices that leaked bright, splashing streams to the water level below, and above in the higher stairs, to the harbour beside the grain stores, the swans, the water hens and the beds of green lilly pads with white lilly flowers.
A long, black, narrow barge puttered from the narrow upstream channel into the harbour, and waited for the lock side keeper. Lannigan appeared in the splendour of his uniform: a black-grey suit, preceded by his fob and chain secured waistcoat and puffing pipe, grasped beneath a thick grey moustache and a battered narrow brimmed hat. He went quickly to winch the splashing, noisy, water into the lower trough, raise the level then open the gates to capture the barge; then lowering the water to the lower level and releasing the barge into the lower stairwell of the canal, so that it could continue its journey.
Job completed the keeper returned to his green gated, rose-arched, cottage pathway, and stopped to remove his hat and mop his brow, checked his timepiece before entering the twilight interior to await another puttering summons.
They ran up the hill to the higher level and walked canal-side, past the hazel groves the hawthorns, greengage trees and the damsons, towards the castle and their secret place above the straight keep wall: conquered just like the high orchard barrier with pointed stanchions fashioned from the rusty hay turner.
High above the ruins, the dungeons and the lower staircases, moat-circled from invasion by the sedentary blue-green Grand Canal waters, and the diamond glitter on the tumbling darting, skirting Barrow river flow, on their regal seat in the window, beside the battlement walk, they kissed, hugged, sighed, talked and dreamed.

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